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PostSubject: Poetry by me   Fri Aug 29, 2014 3:31 pm

So yeah, I like writing poetry, been doing it for quite a while now Smile Would love some responses.^^

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If you're interested in more, this is my DeviantArt: http://ereb-ohtar.deviantart.com/

"And she will be the one, that makes my heart breathe. Breathing, like the air, I push out while thinking about you, loving you, missing you. Or you will be the one, letting my heart bleed, making tears, run down my face, making me hide my sorry self, you are my destiny, you are my future"
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by me   Thu Sep 04, 2014 12:41 pm

Aww, the homeloaf one is cute.

They look good to me but I'm not great with poetry structure and such so others may want to chime in here.
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