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PostSubject: Fallen Star.   Fri Aug 29, 2014 4:59 pm

The green of the trees,
The blue of the sky,
The soft brown of the earth,
It all seems dull in the light of the moon.

The moon that washes all away,
Except the stars who shine like none other,
I used to sit and look in wonder,
At how bright they shone when the dark swallowed the ground.

I sat and stared,
But then the twig snapped,
And like that the world was wide awake,
Owls hooted,
Wolves howled,
And you shone brighter than the stars that I so admired.

Your hair shone brighter,
Those stars above dulled with jealousy,
The moon could not wash you away,
The dark could not swallow you.

So now when I sit,
It's not the stars that I admire and long to touch,
It is you,
You who make that stars grow envious,
You who tame the moons liquid light,
You who have claimed the forest.

You are the reason I sit each night,
And wait until the sky is dark,
And there you are,
Always sitting,
My own fallen star.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star.   Fri Aug 29, 2014 9:26 pm

that could be the lyrics of a song

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star.   Sat Aug 30, 2014 10:27 am

well I'm a better story writer than a poet but maybe I should try and turn it into a song. And you seem to speak amazing English so don't worry about it.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star.   Sat Aug 30, 2014 2:50 pm

you should ask the fellow slices about getting an audio recording put behind it Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star.   Sat Aug 30, 2014 2:55 pm

Either that or send it to Anna and say "What can you do with this?" haha
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star.   Sat Aug 30, 2014 3:49 pm

send a message out to the other Slices Razz see if anyone is willing to take it on
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star.   Sat Aug 30, 2014 4:04 pm

lets see what I can do with it first, if I get stuck I'll be asking anyone possible to help me out haha
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star.   Mon Sep 01, 2014 9:48 pm

i would love to help my fellow slices

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