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PostSubject: A Compilation of Sorts   Sun Aug 31, 2014 2:41 pm

Poetry is my thing.

I really am incredibly lazy, so for me poetry is a short story shoe-horned into a few stanzas that took 10% of the time to write and is 100% more expressive and interpretable. Not to bag on short stories per se but-to me at least-the less words there are, the less there is to trip up my reader or lead them down wrong turns or suspicious looking back streets.
Did I mention that they take less time to write?
That is a big selling point right there.
Granted it means I have to be much more careful with the words I weave but when the tapestry is just as rich, I feel as though all that slaving away and trawling through thesaurus.com was worth it...but maybe it's just me.
Many underestimate my laziness.
Now you know the truth.

Yaaay for poetry! '(^o^)'

Below are a few pieces that I keep close to my heart and would consider finished, however if you want to critique/give feedback then fear not! I will welcome whatever you have to say with open arms. Smile Enjoy! Very Happy


Unequals:
 

A Lifetime:
 

Cigarette Butt:
 

Breathing:
 

I'm sorry they're all so long ;-;

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