Aerrhyn
Posts : 3
Join date : 2014-08-29
Age : 31
 |  Subject: Poetry by me  Fri Aug 29, 2014 3:31 pm | |
| So yeah, I like writing poetry, been doing it for quite a while now  Would love some responses.^^ - A slice of the homeloaf:
A slice of new beginnings
A loaf more than a home
We look back to our motherbread
As we bake paths for our own
Forget not you, the loaf
Forget not I, the slice
Bread burns when in heat too long
But bakes not when in ice
The crumbles show experience
The mold shows our growth
But don't forget your origin
As a slice of the homeloaf
- Fear:
Darkness, not the light
Slowly wrapping tendrils
Fading, in and out
All is in the end
Fear, I take her arm
Walk beside my safety
Fear, she takes my arm
Hide within her lies
Mindless drafting, Spiraling down
Animate the feeling
Long before the subtle find
Long before the falling
Clock ticks slower than before
Time returns itself
Rest in sheets of salt and wine
All is good in time
If you're interested in more, this is my DeviantArt: http://ereb-ohtar.deviantart.com/ | |
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Saphira
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Posts : 154
Join date : 2014-08-25
Age : 39
Location : Bel Air MD
| | Subject: Re: Poetry by me Thu Sep 04, 2014 12:41 pm | |
| Aww, the homeloaf one is cute.
They look good to me but I'm not great with poetry structure and such so others may want to chime in here. | |
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