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Ali-Kat

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PostSubject: You didn't know where i got it from?   Tue Sep 09, 2014 12:38 pm

As a kid i heard my mum say
"Where did she get this behaviour?"
you told me to be good
often, i didn't listen
for years we both never understood where it had come from

but one night i lay awake
and knew exactly where i'd got it from
so mother dear,
here's your answer.

I watched a girl drink a strange bottle because it told her to.

I watched another being kidnapped by pirates

I watched a boy run away from home

I watched kids play all night

I watched as kids disobeyed their parents

I watched as other befriended bad people

I watched people lie
I watched people die
I watched people cheat
I watched people deceive
and i watched as people fought for no reason.

You still don't know where I got it from?

Disney.

That's where.
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PostSubject: Re: You didn't know where i got it from?   Tue Sep 09, 2014 5:46 pm

This is funny ^^ Why did you choose to center your poem???
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PostSubject: Re: You didn't know where i got it from?   Wed Sep 10, 2014 11:53 am

thank you. and im not sure really, sometimes i center them sometimes i dont, i guess it helps seperate certain lines and makes it look neater for some of my poems but theres no real reason haha
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