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 Just some decent Brostep.

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cubeikofficial

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PostSubject: Just some decent Brostep.   Just some decent Brostep. Icon_minitimeFri Oct 31, 2014 2:04 pm

It's some sort of cross between Brostep and Electro house, so yeah, what do you think?
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TSHmusic

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PostSubject: Re: Just some decent Brostep.   Just some decent Brostep. Icon_minitimeThu Nov 06, 2014 12:13 pm

TL;DR This has great potential. Work on your layering/track progression and you can make this a really good track.

The piano thing in the second part of the intro is out of key, and it has no real build to the drop. Try a single note that increases in pitch for 8 bars before the drop. There's no sub bass, and I feel like there's a lot of elements missing. A strong tip is to have an arp in the background, it fills out empty space real good (just a high square with no sustain and very little decay and some reverb, following the progression with fundamental, third, fifth and eight in 8ths or 16ths works every time). It's maybe a bit short? I really like your sound design. The drums is good and the bass in the drop hits hard. You should try to vary the drum pattern a little though, for some variation and progression.
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