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PostSubject: Drumstep WIP   Thu Apr 09, 2015 7:19 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Drumstep WIP   Sat Apr 25, 2015 1:05 pm

Hmm, the pluck thing is out of tune of everything else...In fact a great deal of things are out of tune from themselves. As for arrangement it's pretty decent so far but work on getting stuff in key before you continue. Maybe you were going for some dissonance but to be honest It really doesn't work here, sometimes it does, sometimes it doesn't, and unfortunately this isn't one of them.
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PostSubject: Re: Drumstep WIP   Sun Apr 26, 2015 9:17 am

Well, first of all thank you for replying and for being polite.
Now, about the out of tune thing, the melody was written in a diminished scale, which sometime sounds very dirty, in order to make the melody sound heavier. I tried to rewrite the melody in a natural minor scale, but then the track lost a lot of it's heaviness. Maybe I should try to write a different melody that will fit the diminished scale better.
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