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The Waiter

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PostSubject: My trap track thing   My trap track thing Icon_minitimeThu Sep 03, 2015 7:58 pm

Helloaf homeslices!
I made this trap track a while ago and I tried submitting it to youtube promoters, but none of them accepted it.
Can you please tell me what can I improve in this track or what did I do wrong? Anything would help really, as long as I can understand the things about the track that should be kept and the ones that do not work as well.

https://soundcloud.com/thewaiterproductions/the-waiter-against-the-law/s-SqKEY
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Martin Haas



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PostSubject: Re: My trap track thing   My trap track thing Icon_minitimeSun Sep 06, 2015 2:41 pm

IMO the Trap Kick is not clear. For example a classic 808 Kick sounds "clearer" to me.
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PostSubject: Re: My trap track thing   My trap track thing Icon_minitimeMon Sep 07, 2015 12:55 pm

Thank you for the feedback! I'll check how the track sounds with less processing on the 808 kick.
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PostSubject: Re: My trap track thing   My trap track thing Icon_minitimeMon Sep 21, 2015 4:14 pm

https://soundcloud.com/thewaiterproductions/the-waiter-against-the-law-wip-2/s-X3NvN

I changed the 808 sample and did some other things with the track. I think maybe the sirens need some work, but I don't want to completely remove them. Maybe some help with that?
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