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MnilinM

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PostSubject: Super WIP Metal-ish-electronic   Wed Aug 27, 2014 3:28 pm

I'm not super fantastic at any one genre.
My tracks use a version system. As you can see, this is Version 1 which means it's in its super infantile stage.
Still, though... Thoughts?

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PostSubject: Re: Super WIP Metal-ish-electronic   Wed Aug 27, 2014 3:39 pm

Sounds a bit repetitive at times(but not much) then changes and you like feel like there is something else that's missing like an extra guitar or something making crazy shreds/Picking. that could maybe be something to add to it I don't know.

oh almost forgot. It sound awsome keep it up.

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PostSubject: Re: Super WIP Metal-ish-electronic   Wed Aug 27, 2014 3:40 pm

No doubt a LOT could be added lol.

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PostSubject: Re: Super WIP Metal-ish-electronic   Wed Aug 27, 2014 4:11 pm

It's a bit rough, but I definately enjoyed most of it

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PostSubject: Re: Super WIP Metal-ish-electronic   Wed Aug 27, 2014 4:20 pm

I likes it! It may sound a little repetetive, but I think that's just because it has no vocals- I think a lot of metal repeats like this, but the vocals add interest and such.
I love the intro- it really hits hard.
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PostSubject: Re: Super WIP Metal-ish-electronic   Wed Aug 27, 2014 4:34 pm

With some vocals, more transitions and add power to the drums, that could be a great track ! Big screams would perfectly fit I think Very Happy
Btw, great ideas in your songs ! Loving it !

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