Super WIP Metal-ish-electronic

I'm not super fantastic at any one genre.
My tracks use a version system. As you can see, this is Version 1 which means it's in its super infantile stage.
Still, though... Thoughts?

https://soundcloud.com/mnil/not-what-i-expected-v1

-M

Sounds a bit repetitive at times(but not much) then changes and you like feel like there is something else that's missing like an extra guitar or something making crazy shreds/Picking. that could maybe be something to add to it I don't know.

oh almost forgot. It sound awsome keep it up.

No doubt a LOT could be added lol.

It's a bit rough, but I definately enjoyed most of it

I likes it! It may sound a little repetetive, but I think that's just because it has no vocals- I think a lot of metal repeats like this, but the vocals add interest and such.
I love the intro- it really hits hard.

With some vocals, more transitions and add power to the drums, that could be a great track ! Big screams would perfectly fit I think
Btw, great ideas in your songs ! Loving it !