I really want to like this man but to be perfectly honest? Your synths seem a little bland...The phasers a nice touch on the bass but that's all I can really say about it. The mix is fine (Even though there might be a teensy bit too much reverb on the hats) but if I were you I'd stride for more interesting sounds next time...Or still, experiment with new methods of making them. It sounds like everything came from the same synth and its really offputting. The general idea behind it is pretty cool and your structure is spot on...
Just try something totally out the box next time man alright
, You'll grow so much more because of it. Sorry if this came across as harsh I'm just trying to be as critical as I can.